Thursday, August 6, 2009

S304430-Ayaz Hussain

Ayaz Hussain
11/234 Park St.
Brunswick, 3056, VIC


24 July 2009


Dawn News
25 Collins Street
Melbourne, 3000, VIC

Dear Editor

RE: DESIGN LAYOUT

The draft design that was sent contains several inaccuracies in the design layout for my upcoming novel ‘eclipse of the moon’.

The color combination is unsuitable for the outline of the novel as I anticipated a “darker” theme and not cheerful.

Instead of bright color it has composition of dark colors. I would suggest black color should be replaced with the white color. Left margin is should be increased so that reader can read easily inside the pages. As a result, these make novel more attractive to the readers.

Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Ayaz Hussain

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